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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\ )划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； （一） To protect the environment, many people have found that helpful to make the switch from paper and plastic bags for reusable grocery bags. But a report by 参考答案： To protect the environment, many people have found that helpful to make the switch from it paper and plastic bags for reusable grocery bags. But a report by ∧Florida newspaper says to a that reusable grocery bags selling by some supermarkets contain high levels of lead. Lead is a sold metal which can be harmful to human, especially young children. Lead in the bags is not humans或∧a或∧beings possible to pollute food. However, as time went by, lead can come out as a result of repeating likely goes repeated use. The bags with many pictures is found to contain more lead than plain reusable bags are without decoration. We request that the government can take some measures. should （二） When we learn English, we always find we have difficulties in remembering the names of the months. Therefore, if we know something about the history of the months, possibly it won’t be very harder for us to remember them. The following is one of example. January named after God Janus. He was a strange god because he has two faces. He could look in two directions. He could look forward or backward at the same time. He was the god of endings and beginnings. January is the month on which one looks forward to the new year and it’s also a period of time how people think about the past year. Now can you share with us the stories about rest of the months? 参考答案： When we learn English, we always find we have difficulties in remembering the names of the difficulty months. Therefore, if we know something about the history of the months, possibly it won’t be very harder for us to remember them. The following is one of example. January ∧named after God Janus. hard was He was a strange god because he has two faces. He could look in two directions. He could look had forward or backward at the same time. He was the god of endings and beginnings. January is the month and on which one looks forward to the new year and it’s also a period of time how people think about the in when past year. Now can you share with us the stories about∧ rest of the months? the （三） Born in Oct. 28, 1955, Bill Gates grew up in 参考答案： Born in Oct. 28, 1955, Bill Gates grew up in on elementary school or the private and where began his year, Gates left Harvard to devote himself to develop Microsoft, guiding by a belief that the computer would developing guided be a tool of great valuable on every office desktop. He proved to be ∧success in the IT field. value a （四） He is already a singer and a director, so what is the Taiwanese superstar Jay Chou up to now? He’s a talk show host. His program Mr.J was first broadcast on October 31. But unlike her music, the show hasn’t lived down to public expectations and has suffering a storm of criticism(批评). Chou was reported be nervous about the first shows. At that time in fact, it is only thanks to another celebrity(名人)guest that the program wasn’t a failure. In a late show, Chou was criticized for gossiping about Lam Chiling(林志玲), a model from Taiwan, in an attempt to decrease audience rating(收视率). He is already a singer and a director, so what is the Taiwanese superstar Jay Chou up but to now? He’s a talk show host. His program Mr.J was first broadcast on October 31. But unlike her his music, the show hasn’t lived down to public expectations and has suffering a up suffered storm of criticism(批评). Chou was reported ∧be nervous about the first shows. At that time in fact, it is only to show was thanks to another celebrity(名人)guest that the program wasn’t a failure. In a late show, later Chou was criticized for gossiping about Lam Chiling(林志玲), a model from Taiwan, in an attempt to decrease audience rating(收视率). increase （五） Dear Mr. Li, I’m very sorry to have missed the first two lesson this morning. I got up early as usually in the morning, but when I was ready to leave I find my bicycle’s front tyre（轮胎）flat. I wanted to take bus or taxi to school, and I didn’t have any money with me. I had to look for a place along the street to get my bicycle repairing. Unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shops were open in the early morning. So I had to walk to school, carrying my bicycle all the way. That’s how I was late for school. Please don’t worry with my lessons, Mr. Li. I will make up for it and turn to teachers for help if necessary. Yours, Wang Hui 参考答案： Dear Mr. Li, I’m very sorry to have missed the first two lesson this morning. I got up early as usually in lessons usual the morning, but when I was ready to leave I find my bicycle’s front tyre (轮胎) flat. I wanted to found take ∧ bus or taxi to school, and I didn’t have any money with me. I had to look for a place a but along the street to get my bicycle repairing. Unluckily, there were not any bicycle repair shops ∧ were open in the early morning. So I had to walk to school, carrying my bicycle all the way. That’s how I was late for school. why Please don’t worry with my lessons, Mr. Li. I will make up for it and turn to teachers for help about / over them if necessary. Yours, Wang Hui （六） Last weekend I went to the I was proud what I had done. I wish everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need. 参考答案： Last weekend I went to the usual while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a when heard shocked little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. people and managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved. my I was proud ∧what I had done. I wish everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need. of hope （七） Traffic jam is very serious problem in big city especially during rush hours. It can cause lots of trouble. First, people must have to spend longer time getting to our destinations. It was said that much of the lateness for work is caused by traffic jam. Second, wait in the car for a long time can easy put drivers in a bad mood which may lead to more accidents. Also, traffic jam cause serious air pollution. But it is necessary to deal with this problem. In my opinion, the government should develop public transport. It should be cheaper and more convenient and comfortable. Besides, we should use public transport as much as possibly. It’s better to share cars during rush hours. In a word, we should take any possible measures to reduce the use of cars. 参考答案： So causes easily waiting is their cities a （八） Mr. Turner turned over in bed from time to time in last night, for he was very excited that he could not fall asleep. Yesterday morning, he went to a big gardening company, knowing as Green Fingers, for the interview. Mr. Turner, that liked to help his grandfather grow flowers in the garden, looking forward to the job offered by the company. When he got to the company, he found there were many people waiting there and he had no ideas whether he could get the job. While waited, he helped the workers there to remove the fallen trees and clear the road. Unluckily, he was the only one who finally got the job, so the manager decided to give the job to whoever he believed was helpful. 参考答案： very excited that he could not fall asleep. Yesterday morning, he went to so a big gardening company, knowing as Green Fingers, for the interview. known an Mr. Turner, that liked to help his grandfather grow flowers in the garden, who ∧looking forward to the job offered by the company. When he got to the was company, he found there were many people waiting there and he had no ideas whether he could get the job. While waited, he helped the idea waiting workers there to remove the fallen trees and clear the road. Unluckily, he Luckily was the only one who finally got the job, so the manager decided to give because the job to whoever he believed was helpful. |
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