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原文地址：2011MBA英语作文-大作文小作文经典范文(背诵版)作者：江南小子 2011MBA 英语作文经典范文（背诵版） 图表题 描述图表 As can be seen from the above graph, some important changes have taken place in the past several years with regard to the number of people traveling abroad and at home. Obviously more people choose to go abroad for a sightseeing. [one datum] At the same time, we can find more foreigners coming over to China. [another datum] 分析原因It is no difficult job for us to come up with some possible factors that underlie the above complicated phenomenon. For one thing, … Take … as an example. … For another, … Besides, an important factor worth our concern is that … 预言趋势 From what has been discussed so far, it can be predicted that the present situation will continue for quite a while in the near future. So if we can keep the change going on as usual, a bright future will await us. / So if some necessary changes can be made promptly, a bright future will await us. 个人观点 The message means a lot to life as well as society. On one hand, it tells us that…..There is no doubt that ……On the other hand, …. 适合于揭示发展根源以及积极趋势的图表：模版 According to the table (curve graph/bar chart/pie chart), we can see that about (数字/n percent of…)__1__ in (时间)，compared with nearly (数字) n years ago and this figure increases to n percent during a period of n years. It can be expected that __2___ is/are going to ___3__ in the years to come. Why do_4__ /what has brought about the __5__? There are many reasons/factors, I think, that underlie the change/rise/development. The primary reason /factor is, clearly , _6__. Besides, ___7__. And a third reason is probably that __8___. Obviously, with the development of __9_ , I believe that __10__. So I am sure that __12_ in the long run. 现象分析 介绍现象， 描述现象 The past few years have witnessed the emergence
of a widespread social phenomenon, that is, more and more young
people ignore the responsibility of looking after their aged
parents.[existence of a phenomenon] As reported in daily newspapers
and on TV news, the old parents are often driven out of the house,
and find nowhere to go for a living. Or when the parents get sick,
nobody come to their help, even though they have raised several
children. In other words, it’s quite common for young people to
neglect the old in our modern society.
分析现象的原因 预言趋势，个人观点同上 模板一 ： 介绍话题，说明观点（正反）选择观点
分析观点
，支持观点的理由： Though, as anything often has two sides, it’s hard to deny the other choice, my choice is still clear and well founded in the above discussions. Therefore, I hold it beneficial and imperative to maintain that choice, and thus our life will be made better, this society more promising.
结论 模板二:
介绍话题，正反观点 When it comes
to the popular trend of open field work, a vehement discussion has
come up among the general public. A majority of people are in
strong favor of the new living style while still some people argue
that this style is not suitable for a developing country like
China. It seems for the moment that there is no hope of reaching a
compromise between these two groups of opinion.
正反观点的理由: 自己选择观点，及其理由：.From what has been discussed above, it is clear that the two choices are well founded in their respective way. If I am allowed to make a choice, I prefer the second out of two considerations. On one hand, … On the other, … As any coin has two sides, it’s no exception to the two viewpoints here. Personally, the first viewpoint seems more convincing, and therefore more attractive to me. Actually I can enlist one more reason to support this view. That is, … 模板作文A： 1、道歉+建议信：最新英语（二）大纲样题 Directions: 1) make an apology, 2) suggest a solution. Dear Bob： I’m writing to apologize for having forgotten to return the “the Beatles” CD to you when I left Canada. I was in such a hurry that I packed everything in my luggage without checking carefully. Had I paid more attention then, I wouldn’t have made such a stupid mistake. Now something must be done to solve the problem because I understand you cherish the CD enormously. I can either send it to you by express mail or alternatively compensate you at a reasonable price. If you do not mind, I may bring it back to you next time I go to Canada. Please let me know which solution you prefer at your earliest convenience. I really hope you will accept my sincere apology.
亲爱的鲍勃： 我写此信的目的是为了向你道歉。在离开加拿大时，我忘了把那盘披头士乐队的CD还给你。走的时候太匆忙了，我把所有东西都塞到行李中，没有仔细检查。当时要是多加注意的话，就不会犯这种低级错误了。 因为我知道你特别珍爱那盘CD，所以一定要想办法解决这个问题。我可以寄快递包裹给你，也可以按合理的价格赔偿你的损失。如果你不介意的话，我也可以在下次去加拿大的时候把它给你带回去。 请在方便的时候尽快让我知道你倾向哪一种解决方案。希望你能接受我真诚的道歉。 2、订购+建议信 Directions: You are preparing for an English test and are in need of some reference books. Write a letter to the sales department of a bookstore to ask for: 1) detailed information about the books you want, 2) methods of payment, 3) time and way of delivery. Dear Sir or Madam： As I am planning to take the National Entrance Test of English for MA/MS Candidates (NETEM), I have decided to place an order of some NETEM books with due consideration of the good reputation of your bookstore and the high quality of your books. Firstly, please give me particular accounts as regards names, authors, publishing houses and prices of these books. Secondly, I also need to know the terms of payment and after-sell service. Thirdly, I wonder if it is convenient for you to deliver these books by EMS to the headquarters of Beijing New Oriental School by September 1, 2007. I have arranged to pay for the service. I would like to express my gratitude for your kind consideration of my requests. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 3、商务索赔+建议信函 Dear Mr . Smith, With reference to your letter of 6th September ,in which a claim was lodged for a short delivery of 500 silk-carpets , we wish to express our deepest regret over the serious mistake . The mistake is entirely our own .It occurred as a result of staff shortage during the busy season and the fact that the number of goods is not counted carefully. We will make payment by remittance for $382. 00, the amount of claim , upon receipt of your agreement . Its embarrassing to cause inconvenience to any customer ,but unforgivable when that customer is so highly valued as you . Red-face and contrite ,I ask your indulgence and offer you my personal assurance of better service in the future .] With best regards . Liming 亲爱的史密斯先生： 关于贵方九月六日信中要求对短缺五进件丝毯进行索赔一事，我方深表遗憾，非常抱歉出现这一严重失误。 失误的造成完全是我方的原因。在此销售旺季，由于员工短缺，未能仔细清点货物数量。如贵方同意，我方将电汇索赔金额382美元。 给顾客带来不便是很令人窘迫的，尤其是给像您这样重要的客户带来不便是无法求得谅解。我羞愧而懊悔地请贵方包容这一失误，并保证今后提供更优质的服务。 模板作文B： 在准备大作文的过程中，大家慢慢可将具体步骤和相应的时间确立下来。熟悉操作步骤，能极大地提高效率和成功的概率。拿到题目之后，一是看图读图，一是看指令。综合考虑后将主题确定下来，就可以构造文章的整体结构了。之后考虑每段大致分成几点来写。如果熟悉这个过程，速度是非常快的。在这上面节省下来的时间，可以被用在对词句的斟酌之上。这样主动权掌握在自己手里，考试中就会有稳定的发挥了。 4、漫画作文—批判危害性的框架 (1) To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several serious effects have been put forward. (2)To begin with,（主题） not only results does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life. (3)In addition, nothing is more harmful than（主题） to contradict with a harmonious society. (4)Last but not the least, no issue is as harmful as（ 主题 ）to increase family burdens, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. (5)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . (6)According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have ever experienced主题will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future. (7)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of something. (1)From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent主题. (2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect something. (3)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction. (4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one,our efforts will eventually pay off.(6) Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later. 5、图画作文—城市化对环境的影响 Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should: 1. describe the drawing, 2. interpret its meaning, and 3. make your comment. You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. 该文可分三段来写。第一段描述图画。第二段分析城市化带来的严重后果。第三段谈解决问题的办法。 This picture leaves a deep impression on me: a skyscraper, like a beast with sharp teeth, is pulling a big tree completely out of the earth. Anyone who has seen this picture will realize that urbanization has made a serious impact on the environment. Although urbanization has improved our quality of life in many aspects, we must be aware that it has also brought about a series of unfavorable consequences. First, the farmland in the country is shrinking. For one thing, some rural areas become cities during the process of urbanization, chiefly because they are near big cities and thus included in the urban development plan. For another, more and more rural people are now working in the cities. They bring advanced technology back to their homeland and the land may serve diversified purposes nowadays. Second, sometimes, the rural land, rivers and air are polluted. When more and more new factories are set up, the surrounding environment is likely to decay. In my mind, it is not necessarily the result. First, if urban planners take the environment into consideration before the actual construction stage, the present situation will be much better. Second, every citizen should be both the advocator and the practitioner of environment protection. Third, laws and regulations should be established to punish those environment violators severely. Only when such measures are implemented will cities take on a better look and bring all of us a better life. 第一段首句描述图画，并在第二句中点出了图画说明的社会问题——城市化对环境带来的负面影响。第二段首句是段落统领句，该句旨在引出下文的严重后果。可是城市化是有利有弊甚至利大于弊的事情，如果不想谈有利的方面，就可以使用一个让步状语从句，从而不失客观。这里请大家用心领悟。而后分两方面来说：一是耕地减少，二是环境污染。 第三段首句别具一格，是特殊的段落统领句，与传统的办法类统领句根据不同情况加以使用，可取得良好效果。比如说，如果图画给人的冲击很大，就可以使用一些主观色彩较强的句型来感染读者。而后分城市规划者、民众和法律三方面来说，条理非常清晰。最后一句是结语，包括一个平行结构和“城市让生活更美好”的理念，请大家体会。 6、图表作文 “Changes in the ownership of Houses in Beijing ” Ownership of Houses in Beijing
Outline: 1. 根据上图描述北京市住房产权的变化 Changes in the Ownership of Houses in Beijing As can be clearly seen from the above graph,
great changes have taken place in the ownership of houses in
Beijing during the past decade. In 1990, 75% houses in Beijing were
state - owned, with only a quarter left for individuals. From then
on, the number of private houses has increased much, but still less
than state - owned ones. While by the year of 2000, private houses
It goes without saying that some driving factors
that contribute to the above changes may be summarized as fallows.
To begin with, with the rapid development of market-oriented
economy, the Beijing government abandoned the traditional housing
system which did not accommodate to the new situations. Houses were
no longer distributed according to people' s ages or official
status. People were encouraged to buy their own houses. What’s
more, owing to owing to the rapid improvement of Beijing’s living
standard, an increasing number of people can afford to buy their
own apartment. Based on what has been discussed above, we may reasonably make the comment that the Changes in the Ownership of Houses in Beijing not only foster the economic development and city construction of Beijing but also improve Beijing People’s housing standard and living conditions. (229)。 关于吸烟有害健康的模版短文 It is said that the smoking does good to our health. Nothing could be further from the truth. Why do we lay much emphasis on this? Several points analyzed below might equip us with better understanding of what we are heading for. For one thing, those who usually smoke have more opportunities to catch serious illness even cancer than those who do not. That is to say, the more they smoke, the sooner they will say Goodbye to the world. For another, it is clear that those smokers who have suffered the sadness resulted from the smoking often assure their responsibilities to bring home the bacon especially in the countryside. That means the smoking cost their families the vigorous labors. And above all, their medical fares, which smokers can not afford to cover, have to be shared among the government. No better illustration of this idea touched on above can be taken than the case as listed below, 例证. Consequently, no issue is as critical to individual and national survival and prosperity as clearing up harms arising from the smoking. Judging from what has been argued above, people have come to realize the harms arising from the smoking, like Pandora’s box, has been the crippling force of China economy growth. It is necessary, hence, that efforts be made to acquire insight into the values of controlling the smoking .To begin with, the government should make stricter law to ban people from smoking in more public places; In addition, people should enhance when they we young; Only by undergoing these measures, can we fulfill our dream: No smoking everywhere! 译文：（仅供参考） 据说，抽烟对身体有好处，但事实并非如此。 为什么我们要对抽烟的危害性予以高度的关注呢？下面分析的几个要点，会让我们更深刻的认识到我们所面对的抽烟的危害性。首先，那些经常抽烟的人要比那些不经常抽烟的人有更多的机会患上诸如癌症等更为严重的疾病。其次，我们很清楚地看到，这些经受着由于吸烟导致着更大痛苦的烟民们，他们往往还要承担起养家糊口的责任，这在农村尤甚。更有甚者，烟民们无法承担起巨额的医疗费用，因而不得不转嫁给政府承担。没有比下面的例子更能说明上述所论的观点了（例子）。所以我们要说，再也没有比吸烟的危害性对个人和民族的生存与兴旺更为关键的了。 从以上的辩论可以判断，人们已经开始领悟到吸烟带来的害处。烟瘾的问题将会放慢中国在经济上的发展。就像 “盘多拉 ”箱子被打开后，把害处都散发出来了.首先，政府应该制定更为严格的法律，来禁止人们在更多的公共场所抽烟；另外，我们应该从小就提高对抽烟危害性的认识。通过上面的一些措施，终有一天，我们将实现我们的梦想：全世界无烟！ 英语写作必备 总原则得二： 要有固定，漂亮得“外表” 分析历年试题，考研究生出题类型不外乎四种：（问题）单向类、（好现象）单向类、双向类、图表加这三种。
一、（问题）单向 格式总共是三段 段一：S1+S2+S3+S4+S5 （S——sentence）共5句话，一共60字左右，下面TO出每句话可以套用得格式，这些漂亮得格式是一定要牢记和熟背得！ S1是介绍，固定格式有 1．The past few years(decades)have witnessed us (our society) faced with the issue of…… 2. In recent years there has been a growing concern among the general public over the issue of…… 3. Nothing can be more serious (upsetting ,outstanding, meaningful…) than the issue of…… S2+S3运用Flex 方式进行扩展和包装，这些Flex 方式在后面详细TO出，要熟背！ 运用 According to a recent survey made by Dr. Cao, head of sociology department at Beijing University,70%....;and 30%....(在此直接用数字，不要写英文，一般写两句随便TO出两个数据足够 S4 “同一份调查还表明…（又TO出另一个数据） The same survey also shows that +（又一数据） S5 收尾，同S1呼应，“由此可见，…问题已经非常严重了” It can be concluded, therefore, that the issue of…… 段二：120——140字左右 开头： 开始列举了，但是千万不要用那些滥词：first，second，firstly，secondly，印象分会降低，要用些漂亮得词，尽可能用短语： S2,S3,S4 在简单阐述了各自一个观点得后，就开始进行Flex扩展，扩展可运用Quotation 或是Example达到增加60——80字： To illustrate the point, let’s take a look at what ……(President Cliton) said in an article :“。。。。” 所以，整个第二段是核心段，基本性得性结构是： 开头S1（10字） + S2 扩展 S3 50字 扩展 共扩展60-80字 S4 扩展 段三（解决方式，suggestions） S2 On one hand, we should urge our government to lay down stricter rules to forbid…… S4 In addition , our government should put in more money to protect ( encourage) …… S5 On the other hand, we should try every means to enhance the public awareness of the issue of… 二、（好现象）单向类 段一 介绍 60 字 段二 分析 有意义性原因（或结果 benefits） 做法 段三 结论（要重视） 段一 介绍 开头：Nothing can be more outstanding (meaningful ) than …… 接下来运用得扩展和（问题）单向类相同 段二 分析 (1)开头： (2) benefits 社会得 经济得 个人得 （3）做法 接下来运用扩展方式 段三 结论 重视 社会经验 （money， awareness） 个人经验 （ awareness，我得决心等等） 说明：该现象为较大类得，如 希望工程，就可以加上社会得重视；较小得如 交兄弟姐妹，信念如明灯，就只用个人经验得做法。 开头： 三、双向类 （一） A1 VS A2 = contrast “对照”即是一个事物得两方面做比较，如看电视得利弊，出国留学等等，A1好，A2坏；或是A1坏，A2好； （二）A VS B = compare 对比 即是两个事物做比较，如锻炼是跑步好还是做操好等，A B同好或是同不好 但是两种题型结构都是同样得，如下： 段一 摆擂台，展现“两”面 段二 回到A （A1） 单向分析 原因，或结果，有意义性，做法 段三 回到B （A2） 段四 结尾 抉择类 表态类（用死不表态法）
段一 1．When it comes to the issue (phenomenon) of ……( tuition fee;TV effects), different people have radically different opinions. Some people hold onto the idea that ……. Other people ,however, deem that…… 2. As regards the issue of……,there is a popular discussion. Some people … Other people ,however,…… 段二 开头：…… 接下来和单向类得段二相同 段三 开头 接下来和单向类段二相同 段四 表态类（死不表态法） Just as any coin has two sides, it’s no exception with the issue of …
抉择类 As discussed above, each side has its advantages and disadvantages. If I’m allowed to make a decision, I prefer A to B ( B to A) , for the following reasons. On one hand,….. On the other hand,…… 应试作文杀招 得二 四、图表类 此类作文是近年来得热点，但这类作文只有段一和这三类不同,其他都同样得来写 每一幅图画(表),尤其是cartoon, 是要表达一个philosophy(哲理),因此,段一就是描述这一哲理得段落,但是描述得阶段只用一到两句话来“轻描淡写”说出这个哲理即可。 近年来几乎考得都是cartoon，但是一定不要陷如误区以为要对cartoon进行大量得描写，象就在这个秋季考得养老得cartoon，真正意义上是就两句话描述一下画面就马上引出你得结论，接着就开始拿问题类作文得格式一套，so easy！ 段一： 一、“从这幅漫画中我们这些考研究生者们可以得出如此一个结论：……” 1.As can be seen from the cartoon,we are able to arrive at a conclusion that …… 二、假设是graph作文，则一定会有数据，就一定会表现出一定得趋势（tendency，trend） There has been a gradual(slow,sharp) increase(decrease) in the number (amount, size ) of …… There has been ……increase……of …….while there has been ……decrease ……of … 将趋势描述出来后，再在graph上找出两个同类数据来帮助我们这些考研究生者们得结论就ok了。不要将graph上得所有数据都列举出来。 段二，段三，段四就和单向或双向作文一模同样了。 三大扩展方式—— 扩展方式是帮助本人在没话可说得阶段达到快速增加作文字数得最有效得方式，运用flex得目得就是想让感想长就长，爱短就短。因此可以熟练运用flex来控制字数。 一、Quotation 引用 就是随便找一个人出来，介绍他一番，引用他得话，过了一段时间说我就是如此想得。（大约增加50字）而且引用此人得话一定要用：“。。。。”如此得直接引语格式，直接用现在时得时态，避免本人在时态上出错。 To illustrate the point, let’s take a look at what President Bush said in an article: “……” 二、Example 举例（可以通过天花乱坠得想象来达到） 如：只有一举例，凡是好事就说象my friend，Jerry，如何如何样；而凡是坏事就说象my neighbor 怎样怎样。 e.g. 2007年考研究生作文图画是为什么船多而鱼少了呢？ 举例：我邻居20人，每人每天吃5条鱼，吃一年下来，可想而知道。据了解，有70%得中国家庭都是这么干得！（这几句用英文写出来，嘿嘿，你看看有多少字了？） 因此从上面这个例子你可以发现你在作文当中写得什么内容不要害怕其是否真实，因为内容改卷老师是不会留意得，你得目标就是把作文写得尽可能得长还有段首段尾得句子足够漂亮。 三、 Statistics 统计数字 就是随便找数字，成立一个统计结果，格式可以参考我们这些考研究生者们在问题类作文段一阶段得举例。 最后强调： 1．上面用英文列出得句式一定要熟记背牢，当然，你再另外回顾一些类似得句式，尤其是能大量用上考研究生words得句式。 2．四类作文得结构要熟记，三大Flex要时时会用，常常是无法想象或不可能有东西可写得阶段，Flex就要派上用场。 3．训练作文可以从12月上旬开始，就拿历年得考题来，先判断是哪类作文，过了一段时间用中文把整篇感想得结构先构思出来，如就在这个秋季得cartoon，说得是养老足球赛，段一就简单描述一下画面马上引出，现在养老得问题得到社会得越来越多得重视，接着段二就开始分析为什么会出现儿女不愿意养老得原因，第一，第二，第三是因为什么什么，每一点原因进行扩展；段三就提出对策（因为是问题类作文）。 每次如此构思得后，就反复背和默写句式，因为平常虽然背得多，但要是不写一下，到了临场会很生疏得。 4．强调又强调：4、6级作文一定要写到200字左右，考研究生要写到280——300字左右才会拿高分。 |
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