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初中生写作现状：“六大病症” 1、审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯； 2、单词拼写错误：frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite & quiet … 3、动词缺失：Eg: I happy I can go to Peking. 4、前后不一致（数、人称、时态、主谓不一致等） eg: All people have their own dream. He said he wants to have a good rest. 5、中式英语（Chinglish）：Eg: I very like sports. 6、综合性错误：单词大小写、标点符号以及形容词副词的混淆、连词的缺失误用、句子结构不完整等。 中考英语高分作文的特点 1、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题； 2、段与段之间，自然过渡，有合适的连接词； 3、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体； 4、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等； 5、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩； 6、分段合理，全文分段一般不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子； 7、首尾呼应，自然成一体； 8、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就给打高分了； 9、字数达标，要点齐全； 10、书写工整，卷面整洁，少有涂改痕迹。 中考英语高分作文的写作要点 1、根据实际情况，在文章当中交叉使用长短句； 2、综合使用各种所谓的“高级”结构； 3、适当选择恰当的连词来表示文中的并列、转折、选择、条件、因果等关系，并且注意句子结构的变化，避免重复和单调； 4、在适合的语境当中，在自己十分有把握的情况下，使用名言警句来增加文章的色彩； 5、不鼓励原创的语言，尽量使用平时老师批改过的，教材中有的，自己十分熟悉和有把握的语言； 6、文章字数必须达标，要点要写齐全； 7、书写工整，卷面整洁，尽量避免涂改； 8、考试中的写作是一种控制性写作，在至多25分钟的时间内要实现审题，列提纲，打草稿，修改草稿，打磨语言，并准确，美观地誊写在答题卡上。 如何逐步培养和提升英语写作能力？ （1）词汇短语：词汇是学生用英语表达思想,同时也是写作的基础和源泉。 1. 词汇的巧妙记忆（children; believe…)； 2. 加强中考考纲词汇、短语的听默写； 3. 坚持课外阅读，并用“积累”本收集高频词汇、短语、佳句，加强记忆； 4. 多使用“高端”的词汇。 Eg: I am very interested in pop music. = show/take great interest in I have lots of homework to do every day. =endless/oceans of Playing too much computer is bad for our study. =gets in the way of = have a bad influence on （2）句子：词不离句，完整、准确、新颖、丰富的句式表达是一篇好文章的必备条件。 “多样”的句式变换 1）合并为简单句； Eg: My brother helped me in maths. I made great progress. = I made great progress in maths with the help of my brother . 2）学会使用感叹句； Eg: It is necessary to help others. = How necessary it is to help others！ 3) 善用复合句； Eg: a. We need to help people. The people are in trouble. = We need to help the people who are in trouble. b. We know that more and more students like pop songs. = As we all know, more and more students like pop songs. 4）巧妙使用强调句； Eg: We can achieve our dreams by working hard. = Only by working hard, can we achieve our dreams. 5) 积累丰富的谚语 (一周两至三句）； 英语谚语短小精悍，简洁明快，韵律优美，寓意深刻，在写作中适当引用谚语能增强文章的说服力和感染力。 试感受下列句子在使用谚语前后的区别 As the saying goes, “ .” 1) 锻炼对学生有好处 （未使用谚语）It is good for us students to take exercise. （使用谚语）As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” 2) 集中注意力于学习 （未使用谚语）We should concentrate our mind on our studies. （使用谚语）As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” 其他谚语: 1. Think twice before you do. 三思而后行。 2. Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。 3. Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者，事竟成。 4. Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母。 5. An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一苹果，疾病远离我。 6. All roads lead to Rome. 条条大道通罗马。 7. Every coin has two sides. 凡事都有两面性。 8. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。 （3）篇章：词不离句，句不离篇。能够灵活自如地运用所学的词汇、短语、句型、语法，谋篇布局写出精彩的文段是训练写作的最终目的。 如何运用已有的“遣词造句”能力在写作实践中学会“谋篇布局”，“战无不胜”呢？ 作文常用连接词语 ►转折：but, yet, however, though, although ►时间、顺序：first , second, next, and, then, after that, finally firstly, secondly, finally (last but not least) at the same time, from now on, in the end, at last ►递进：besides, also, in addition, also, not only...but also, what’s more ►解释：in other words, or, that is 作文常用词语 ►因果：because, because of, therefore, so, as a result, thus ►例举：such as, like, for example, and so on ►肯定：of course, certainly ►对照：instead, instead of, on the contrary... ►总结：Generally speaking... To tell you the truth... Believe it or not... All in all... In a word ... On the whole... For these reasons... That is why ... As we all know... = As is known to us ... ►转化话题：In my opinion... In fact... By the way... I am afraid... |
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