【原】我亦是行人

苏轼写过好多首临江仙，最为人熟知的应该是写于黄州的“小舟从此逝，江海寄余生”。据说这首词第二天传出去，把黄州当地的父母官惊出一身冷汗，以为苏轼驾舟从江上逃跑了，急急忙忙来找，发现他老人家还在睡着，昨夜的酒没醒呢！

十年后，苏轼在杭州送别友人钱穆父，写下了另一首临江仙，结句更是无比精彩：人生如逆旅，我亦是行人。这样的人，也许偶尔念叨几时归去，也许偶尔自嘲不合时宜，但是行动起来，永远是心向阳光，努力盛放的。顺逆也好，无非都是行走在路上，有什么区别。

面对这样的好句，实在无法改写哪怕一字。思来想去，干脆还是小译一下吧，就当再一次学习。

临江仙 送钱穆父

宋 苏轼

一别都门三改火，

It has been three times

I saw the smoke arise

after you left the Capital

on that Cold Food Festival

天涯踏尽红尘。

Through endless desolation

back from your destination

with ashes across your fingers

and dust on your shoulders

依然一笑作春温。

Your smile is still comforting

as warm as this spring

无波真古井，

There's no wave in a well

like no shadows in your heart

有节是秋筠。

There are  marks on a bamboo

like rewards of your art

惆怅孤帆连夜发，

Your boat is waiting in the dock

My horse is circling aroung a rock

I'll watch you out of my sight

again in one lonely night

送行淡月微云。

The moon is gently fading

The cloud is quietly hiding

The maid couldn't finish her singing

Only two of us keep drinking

樽前不用翠眉颦。

Let's smooth the frozen eyebrow

have a long farewell bow

人生如逆旅，

Life is just a journey

which we don't know how far

我亦是行人。

I'm also on the road

looking up to our guiding star

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附 2018年3月29日 旧感