英语读后续写-比赛活动类
一、活动/比赛前
l.努力准备
1.The setting sun witnessing his unremitting efforts(不懈的努力），he kept sharpening his skill regardless of his aching muscle.
2. Not until the darkness swallowed everything on the horizon(黑夜吞噬地平线上的一切）did he stop training and dragged aching legs home. （倒装：not until... did he..直到...才 ）
3.The following days witnessed him practicing freestyle hard.
4.He dragged his aching legs down the road to home, arms trembling with fatigue. (独立主格：疲惫的细节描写）
2.遇到困难/挫折（曲折性原则）
1.Hard as he trained, he still made little progress, which put him on the verge of collapse.
2.The fact that he made little progress threw him into low spirits.
3.受到鼓舞（人物B互动）
1.Whenever he was exhausted/full of fatigue, Eddie’s words echoed/flashed into/popped into his mind , and supplied energy to him/which instill power into him.
2.He was about to quit/give up when my teacher cast an encouraging glance at him. （be about to do...when...正要做某事的时候，突然...)
3.A gust of excitement surged through him as he made an another attempt.
二、比赛中（过程描写）
1.Then came the big day. （倒装）
2.With the sound of the starting gun piercing（穿透/刺破） through the air, the race began as expected.
3.I could feel that all the eyes were fixed on us. A strong sense of nervousness surged through me.
我能感觉到所有的眼睛都盯着我们。一种强烈的紧张感涌上我的全身。
4. Then the next few minutes witnessed fierce competition between other competitors.
5.So dynamic was he that he swam swifter than ever. With his arm waving, he cut through the water smoothly like a flying fish. （so+adj+谓+主+that...)
他活力四射，游得比以前更快了。他挥动着手臂，像飞鱼一样平稳地划水。
6. Sandro found himself flexible like a dolphin in the water, propelling （推动）himself forward swiftly. （比喻）
7.Swiftly adjusting his breath, he swam forward like an arrow off the bowstring.(像离弦的箭）
8.150 meters covered，he was left behind by two competitors. In the last 50 meters，he swam to the finish line with all his strength, with his arms pushing forward fast and his legs hitting the water hard. (游泳的过程）
9. My heart dropped, because I was afraid all the training that I had done was in vain. Yet there was something inside me pushing me to win the competition. My heart beating wildly, I tried my best and got closer to the other runners.
三、比赛后（名次+互动+感悟）
1.When the result was announced that Sandro won first place, other players rushed to him and congratulated him, the audiences in the stadium bursting into thunderous applause and cheers. (获奖+祝贺）
2. when the race finished, never in his wildest dream （做梦也没有想到）had he expected that he won the first prize（倒装）./he came first/took the first place/clinched(赢得） the champion in the race. （获得名次）
3. With beads of sweat running down my face and my heart pounding in my chest, I knew that the grueling（艰辛的） hours of practice/painstaking efforts had paid off as I claimed the top spot on the podium（领奖台）.
汗珠顺着我的脸流下来，我的心在胸腔里怦怦直跳，我知道艰苦的练习时间得到了回报，因为我在领奖台上占据了头把交椅。
4.Upon finishing the talk/competition, I trotted（小跑） towards Mareya and gave her a bear hug. Meanwhile, thunderous/a storm of applause rang through the classroom.
5.As the final whistle blew, The cheers from the crowd echoed/rang through the stadium, and I couldn''t help but feel a rush of excitement as I basked/was immersed in the glory of our victory.（can''t help but do 不得不）
人群的欢呼声回荡在体育场内，当我沉浸在胜利的荣耀中时，我不禁感到一阵兴奋。
6.Despite the physical and mental exhaustion, I couldn''t wipe the smile off my face as I reflected on the incredible memories and lessons learned from the competition.
7.It is his hard work and persistence that won him recognition and more friends.（结尾强调句：回扣主题）
8.This experience served as a reminder that the best way to gain recognition/fit into a new environment is to display yourself and make yourself known. (结尾句）
9. It is not the lucky charm brought by ice-cream but his own diligence, persistence and confidence that contributed to his success in swim meet(游泳比赛）.
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